Yet another unfinished work! I started writing this poem/song while I was in the subway on the way home. In faith, I know that extra lines that I need will come. But for now, here’s what I have …
As water gushes under this broken bridge
I began to wonder how I’ll make it through
Then I hear you whisper into my ear
Put your faith in me my son, I’ll walk with you
… more lines here … (i guess no extra lines for now)
August 2nd, 2008 at 10:15 pm
I think this poem is well written even if it’s not finished yet. It’s Simple however, it delivers a strong message. When you hear the voice of the Lord saying, “Put your faith in me my son, I’ll walk with you” there’s nothing else you can do, but follow. A simple instruction (”Put your Faith in me my son”) with overflowing assurance of hope (”I’ll walk with you”)
Keep it up!
I’m Blessed!